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Comments on my poem? thank you!?

I usually dont write this descriptive but i actually wrote this on accident. The words just came out. Usually I come up with a topic or a type of poem i want to write before i write it but this one was different. So i want to know if i should continue to write this way. Also any comments or suggestions? thank you!The sour smell from the onion, never fails to make my porous eyes water.The salty liquid trickling down my baby soft cheeks, always outlining my lips, slowly and gently.Keeping steady pace, passing up mychin and fragile neck; the tear lingers upon my shoulder smallerthen before.When it's ready to leave, it travelsthrough my maze of freckles tothe blue vein pulsing with life onmy wrist.With a quick movement of my hand,the liquid continues to wander; theskin on my knuckles act like speedbumps and slow the tear down toa halt at my fingertips.Almost dried but not completely,it falls quickly to my feetand blends in; and still a new onion is cut.

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Haha, you're car is not possessed. It's an automatic locking that's come with the car. After a period of time if the car has not been started, the car will automatically lock itself. All of my familie's cars do this.
You can buy an old fire hydrant from most municipalities. They do change them out periodically, and then they are trying to figure out what to do with the old ones. After that, low lying shrubs, stmps, rocks and whatever else you want. I'd put the path in in pea gravel. It is easy on their feet, and it someone does the big job on it, it is easy to clean up. Good luck!
pekiti tersia kali - the offical martial art of the philippine police and marines. Its about war, taking no prisoners! Its been used to defened the philippines from invaiding forcing. You learn weapons first in this maretial art, edged and impact. aikido - a japanese martial art. It's primarly a defensive martial art. It incorporates joint locks and throws mostly. Its offten in the category of grapling type martial arts. Krav maga - is about self-defense and military hand to hand combat. This martial art was developed by Israel for the idf and isf. taekwondo - a korean martial art and sport. It has lots of self-defense techniques, but also some offensive techniques. Lots of kicks, very powerful kicks, the most powerful of all the martial arts.

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