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help with my composition?

I need to do a composition about somebody going to stay in my house for a exchange programCan anybody see if everything is ok?quot;Hello Tom, I'm glad you'll stay in my house for your exchange programI want to tell you a few tips of how to behave in Brazil.Use soft clothes, it can be 40°C in the summer! But don't wear swim trunks everywhere, only in the beaches.You had better take care of your money and cellphone while walking in the streets, sometimes, it can be dangerous.Don't forgot to see our famous touristic spots like the Lacerda Elevator, the Barra Lighthouse and the Pelourinho.You also should try one of our dishes: feijoada, acajaré and vatapá.Hugging is very common here in Brazil, so don't be scared.I hope you liked my tips, see you soon, Sallyquot;

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Hello Tom, I'm glad you'll stay with us during your exchange programI want to give you a few tips about the correct way to behave in BrazilBring light clothes, it can be 40°C in the summer! But don't wear swim trunks everywhere, only on the beachesYou should take care of your money and cellphone while walking around because it can be dangeous sometimesDon't forget to visit our famous touristic spots like the Lacerda Elevator, the Barra Lighthouse and the PelourinhoYou also should try some of our dishes: feijoada, acajaré and vatapáHugging is very common here in Brazil, so don't be scaredI hope you liked my tips! See you soon, Sally
FiberOne bars, cereal, and yogurts.
Wholemeal bread is good! Also lots of veggies too!

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