How do I clean a sterling silver ring?
1 - cos u rhyme throughout the rap no good rap techniques used though; use some multies and better use of similesthe last line is pathetic, theres so many better ideas u cudve usedkeep tryin
2I cannot tell if you are native speaker of English or not I gave you two points out of pity Listen to what you want to becomeDo you even listen to rap? Write down the lyrics to every song you hear, and copy them over and over After several years of that, plus expanding your vocabulary, reading literature, and listening to the greatest rapper of all time: Rakim, Slick Rick, Outkast, Wutang, etcYou will improve.
Dude, I'ma be straight honest hereYou suck ballsYou have to use internal and complex rhyme schemesYou have to transition smoothly from one rhyme to the nextUse double and triple entendres, puns all that sht the good rappers have em all over the place.
0 Just by looking at it you can see each line rhymes with the word to the previous line before that Rhymes don't work like thatyou gotta extend it tell a story(You don't have to, but it's better.) 'Tryna make it for the pussys, girls fame'? LolListen to some of the greats, Rakim, Big L, 2pac and you'll learn how to rhyme better.
rub with a soft cloth dipped in baking soda, use a toothbrush to scrub if neededrinse well in warm water and buff dry with another cloth line a small bowl with aluminum foil, shiny side upfill the bowl with hot water and mix in 1 tbs of bleach free powdered laundry soap (not liquid)put the jewelry in the solution and let soak for one minuterinse completely and air dry
