For example: Magnets produce magnetic fields that attracts metalsDo you know any material that has unique properties?
Actually the fascinating thing about the matter on Earth according to dual nature is that all matter is in the wave form, but the matter wavelength(wavelength of the matter in motion)is too small to be perceived by the naked human eyes.all point particles when in electric field of other charged particle experiences attraction or repulsion
I like it; it draws me in. I'll tell you the phrases I don't like: Para 1 In a small cottage at the edge of a forest sounds too cliche-ish, like it was a dark and stormy night I would change the last sentence of para one to: Wide awake despite the hour, they were engaged in a debate. Para 2. The word complicate does not match. Too modern and erudite maybe? Para 3. .his blankets. (Plural) Para 4 He wore a very calm and neutral expression. is just awful. Too prosaic. There has got to be a better way to convey this. But again, I like it LOTS and I want to keep reading.
It needs to be more clearly visualised. Why do the cloaks they are wrapped in turn into blankets? Why do you say they are sitting when later it seems some of them are standing or walking? If they are huddled round the fire for warmth, how can there be enough room for one of them to pace in front of the mantlepiece? Etc.
i love the voices! Oren sounds kinda dark yet hopeful sorta I'm defiantly interested in the story! make sure the beginning is awesome though if i don't like the first two pages i don't read the book i love it especially the names their so.medieval *i couldn't think of the word*
