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Can someone fix this sentence?

the only way to fix this sentence is to not completely rewrite the sentence in a different way. You could only rearrange the words around. So here's the sentence.Farmland Joe Mobbs hoists a cow injured while giving birth to its feet.

Answer:

As far as I see it, if you do not in some way change the construction of the sentence, no matter how many times you rearrange the words, it will never make any sense. On the other hand, even though I still see problems if you simply insert a couple of commas the sentence will make better sense. It's farm hand, btw, and not farmland. Farm hand, Joe Mobbs, hoists a cow, injured while giving birth, to its feet. Edit: WOW, I think Niki actually did solve it! Good for him.
Farmland Joe Mobbs hoists to its feet a cow injured while giving birth .
Joe Mobbs hoists a farmland cow injured while giving birth, to its feet.
While an injured cow is giving birth, Farmland Joe Mobbs hoists it to its feet

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