This poem is very personal to me. Though it may not be obvious, it's actually about the death of a loved one. Please let me know what you think.Down BlanketThe glow of the fireWarms both handsThe icy chill fleeingFrom wet skinDraping a down blanketover my shouldersRoasting my feetClose to the flamesI close my eyesFor one momentAnd recall each wordYou last saidI need to go.You would come back soonGiving me your wordLeaving the roomThis down blanketAnd orange flamesAre all I have leftTo keep me warm.
Soak it in vinegar it really does work I promise
Wow that was veeeeerrrrrryyyyy deep. it could be interpertated many different ways and I'm proud of you for doing that. which is harder than people think! I really like how you described every thing so deeply and it sets a picture very quickly in my mind! I loved it!!!! Keep up the GREAT work!!!! i realllllllllllllllllly like it!!!
I liked it. No personal bad thoughts. Totally sets the scene. Good descriptions.um, thx for not making it all about leaving and love, only half.It was refreshing. I liked it!
