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How does the beginning of this story sound?

How does the beginning of this story sound?

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This is a good beginning! I am writing two books at the moment, one of which is someone who had his memory wiped outIt is a bit cliche thoughAnd I also agree with one of the other comments that it sounds weird when you just look down at yourself for no reason even if your character suffers from amnesiaLike I did to mine, you could incorporate the description of your character somewhere elseLike a reflection in the water or in a mirrorI would also focus more on descriptionBut overall, a very good start! Keep it going! It's always hard to keep the inspiration going, I know that very well, so what you are doing is great!

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