Using orbital inertia for soft landing onto a polar cap or a nearby continent?There is a usefulness to this, if it can be doneBy landing an asteroid with an altitude of a hundred and 20 miles high from sea level to low earth orbitWe can jump start a practical space elevator by digging out tunnels within the asteroid to house an electric rail network to haul freight and space manufactured commerce.As well as building deep inter planetary exploration vehicles in local earth orbital space.It may not be science fiction if we can figure out how to do it in our lifetimesGetting into space may not have to be dangerous or as expensive as it is now with our reliance on rockets.
its good but not something that i would read because its to depressing but idk its just the beginning
In the second-to-last paragraph, you switch from past tense to present tensePersonally, it's not my style of story, but it seems to be well-written, and I could understand people liking it a lot:) It seems to have the basic premise of The Punisher, though, so if you can separate it from that, it'll be alrightI have to say, I was worried when I saw how you typed your question out, hahaI'm glad to see you actually know how to punctuate and capitalize correctly.
MNM, This is actually a good startRight off the bat we see someone who is angry and hungry for retributionThe problem lies with the wording and the punctuationYou need to work on this a bit more Here's the first two paragraphsIf you like what I've done, try to duplicate it throughout the rest of the workThe main problem here is the use of commas where periods should be Edited: Here I was, three years, two months and eighteen days later, standing on the bridge of retributionThere was no turning back nowI needed closure for those years of tormentThe only thing that allowed me to breathe and to keep on living was the rageEvery waking hour was dedicated to finding those who were responsible for killing and brutalizing my four year old son, Devon, and my wife, EvaTheir degradation soiled my memories of them all this timeIt was a muggy night when I arrived in Datica CityA misty veil settled upon the jagged neon painted cityscapeI felt a cool, refreshing night breeze wash over me as I stepped off the rail car and onto the open concourseWith only one bag slung over my shoulder, I walked towards Three Tree Plaza, a two story complex that was connected to the concourseIt housed a handful of cheap hotels where I could stay for the night, before my contact for my next assignment came to collect me in the early morningNotice where I put periods in place of commas, making separate sentencesAlso, try not to use the word 'had' too oftenIt's an annoying word that really isn't needed most of the time The last paragraph, which I didn't edit has the word 'alright.' There's no such wordIt's all rightTwo wordsI have no idea why we never adopted that as we did 'already' and others, but we haven'tThere are books where you will find that would thoughI guess they just let it go since it's used so oftenGood work and keep writingI wish you the bestPJ M
There are some plausible space elevator proposals, but I've never heard of one that involves soft-landing an asteroidIt's probably easier and more predictable to construct it with earthly materialsIf you're also thinking about protecting earth from a potentially world-ending asteroid, soft landing is probably the hard way to do that, tooEasier to deflect it or break it into pieces small enough to burn in the atmosphere.
