Please read the following text first and answer my question.1. Is it feasible to make these appliances such as vacuum cleaners, illuminations, TVs, HDD recorders, air conditioners and such smarter in such a short period?When I feel the distance between quot;makeand quot;smarteris a bit far away, how should I rewrite it?
These appliances indicates that you have already identified them, so you don't need such as vacuum cleaners, illuminations, TVs, HDD recorders, air conditioners and such here. If you haven't in fact identified them, you can change these appliances such as vacuum cleaners, illuminations, TVs, HDD recorders, air conditioners and such to common household appliances. You should also eliminate and such even if you don't take either of my suggestions; the such as at the beginning already implies that there are other similar examples so it's redundant as well as repetitive.
Here's one way of writing it: Is it feasible to make appliances such as vacuum cleaners, illuminations, TVs, HDD recorders, and air conditioners, smarter in such a short period of time?
