Why doesn't crazy glue stick to the inside of its tube?
Your question wasn't why doesn't the glue dry out if left openit was Why doesn't crazy glue stick to the inside of its tubeOn How It Works a TV show, they show the very thin aluminium rolled out and it's lubricated before being made into the tube shape, thus, glue does not stick to the sidesSame method for toothpaste and ointmentsWho know??!
I'm sorry, I don't really like thisThe dialogue doesn't flow, and the adjectives are too forcedPlus, you use too many adjectivesSometimes a laugh is just a laughKeep trying, thoughI feel you have potential-Liv
This is pretty goodVery gripping and it pulls the reader in quicklyMy only criticism is try not to use so many adjectives, that kills a pieceYou can say much more with fewer wordsNice story!
