I am a student learning English.In order to enhance my writing skill, I described what happens in picturesWould you check to see if there are any awkward expressions?_A shepherd is having his sheep come inside a fenceThere are four sheep, all of which are male guessing from their appearanceAll of them have hornsIn the second picture, you can see a crane/fork liftIt is lifting a roof of a houseA lot of kids are standing in line for icecream.I can't see the end of the lineIt stretches out as far as I can see.
That is the rear derailleur hanger it connects to the rear axle and hods the rear shifterThe black S thing holds two cables to together and will go around the handle barsThe nut and two washers look like brake partsThe pins, I have no idea.
It's very goodI would just suggest a few small changes A shepherd is leading his flock inside a fence There are four sheep and they appear to be maleIn the Second paragraph I would only change this It is raising the roof onto the house There are a lot of kids standing in line to buy ice cream The line is so long that I can't see the end of itIt stretches out as far as I can see Hope this helps
its called a replaceble rear derailer hanger hope i helped
