They call me psychi,Cause Im a psychic psycho,A hit from me is like a blow, From a Silo,I have no soul so i steadly eat crow,My only belief is quid pro quo,That means dont touch my dough,Or you'll die slow,Look at me wrong I wont hesitate to throw,Dont think for a second that I dont know,Where you live and like to go,I know your girl she looks like a sow,Every time I see her, Her face starts to glow,And she says hello, Even she knows,You aint on my level, Im on a plateue,I heard you rap your s***ty and slow,And like Asher Roth you got no flow,Step toward me and Ill mold you like dough,B***h you aint bold, Your skin Ill unfold,And when the cops come Ill say look, Behold,Because like I said Im a f****n psycho...Be honest let me know what u think I know its short but I dont like puttin my stuff online where people can take it so I kept it short
Ok ok not bad, it got repeative because the rhyme scheme played over and over...
Yours is good but I don't understand how a silo can hit you or how quid pro quo means don't touch your dough. Oh makes more sense as a missile silo and I knew what quid pro quo meant I just wasn't thinking of it in your terms, that also makes more sense. I'd give it a 7.5-8 now add some multi syllable rhymes to it.
Look, if you think about it it's not lil Wayne's fault at all. He tried to become a rapper then the dumb-a$s public thought he was good so he got big. And you know how celebrities are, the whole I'm famous so I'm talented in whatever I do. Then he became a rocker and the public followed because they are fu?king retarded. But then again, it's not really the publics fault for liking that kind of s?it anyway. It's really the record labels. There is NO good music nowadays, so the labels just dressed up a ****?y band and made them look preppy and likable. They made it so music doesn't really matter, it's all looks. And that's fu?king stupid, because I don't care if the man making the music is a fu?king criminal or something, I just care that the music sounds good. I mean, if the artist is a cool person that defiantly makes me want to go to their concert more, but the labels just took that to a whole new level and exploited the sh?t out of it.
the silo part is alittle iffy but i probably just am uneducated haha. good stuff bro
okey dokey pal so say your the bigger man comin up to me ima run you like a fan why you playin your hate dwells the heart you had took a jump off a cliff and fell your anger swells why you mad? were surrounded by temporary fads! i still offer my hand to you its very true out of the blue really off que but dont get mooed im not wussy so dont treat me like that p*ssy you can be the strongest and still told a lesson thats the true, im confessin' dont wanna harm go head and knit that yarn ya just tellin stories ova fo years get it right i saw you chasin that dyke im high off the kite ima take a bite tonight could be your ear or a nice juicy steak shut the heck up i know your fake
