Any recommendations on how to reassure people that the water is safe?
Dude, you are opening a can of worms there. It is a complex system made up of the basic/general module, the door switches and central switch, and the door lock actuators. It is not something for a DIY not unless the kit you purchased has really goood install instructions.
Bland and boring. Little to no emotion involved. Bad grammar and flow. Pointless. Confusing and tangled. Sorry. It's bad. You can improve by focusing on the narrator and using his experience of the castle rather than description. Draw out the emotion and feeling of the scene. Explain! I hope this helped!
