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Hi can you help me to edit these two sentence.I want to put them in my resume?

1.I used bore scope to check ID Surface of truck hoist cylinder2.I am helping Quality team to get CQI-9 Certificate for heat treatment department

Answer:

Here are alternatives: 1. Checked ID Surface of truck hoist cylinder with bore scope; and, 2. Helped Quality Team get CQI-9 Certificate for heat treatment department. Since it is in your resume, there is no need to specify, I, as it should be obvious that you did the specified task or function.
Experienced in use of bore-scope in checking ID Surface of truck hoist cylinder. Engaged with Quality Team in obtaining CQI-9 Certificate for heat treatment department

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