I'm writing a book and the characters house was broken into, but I don't know how to describe the expressions, how the character would react, and how to explain what the house looks like without having to say quot;The chair was broken, the floor is covered in this, this, this, this, and this.quot; I'm not sure how to describe anything-.- This is what I have so far: quot;As we stepped out the elevator, the first thing I notice is how the door to my apartment was slightly a gapI completely open my door and find that it was trashed as if the person was looking for something.quot; It was a temporary sentence to be able to continue, but it really sucksAny ideas? Anything will help (Examples, styles I could use, etc.) Thank you!!! :D
You need to know how your characters would reactThey are your charactersYou create themYou must know everything about them from what they love for breakfast to what their wallpaper is to what they carry in their pocket to how they would react having a burglaryKeep in mind that people don't go all poetic when they see a break-inJust present it factuallyBroken window or door as the entry point and missing items.
Skip the toastingIt dries the bread.
There is nothing to keep it moistJust Peanut butter and bread is always going to be dryAdd some 100% fruit spread
YesUse a ziplock plastic baggie instead of the aluminum foilAluminum foil does not create a seal against the air so your bread is drying outA ziplock baggie can be reused and keeps the air away from your breadYour bread will be fresher, softer, more moist.
Try wrapping it in cling filmIt'ss cheaper and easier to use and it'll keep your sandwitch moist! :)
