Well.. i have a 3 yr old colt, i have broken him in and i am just starting him in english now. He is an amazing horse!but the problem is.. i plan on doing several sports with him.Jumping, eventing(maybe), dressage, and cross country.And at the moment i am just using a snaffle D bit, which bit would work best?
Show not tell means describe what's happening, not just dictate. So you don't want to write something like The fire alarm went off and everyone was annoyed. Instead, you want to describe what happened: what does the fire alarm sound like, how do people respond, what are the smells or feelings associated with this event? If you were in the situation, you would know everyone was annoyed without everyone walking around saying I'm annoyedhow would you tell that? What would their faces look like, what would their speech sound like?
He did not invent the steel plow
