Also, does paint ball paint wash out and do these places sell helmets with face shields?
I think writing is hard work to put this out there you may end up to disappointed to continue but don't practice makes perfect editing cuts to the core. 1st you describe the women as fat and Oren as tall etc.if this is cut out of book your working on wouldn't both of them have been described earlier.In that case there name should be description enough.I do like the conflict between the two men stop and asses the situation.Or take action primal responce I'm interested how they may compromise the situation or if they split ways.
hahahaha, no I haven't Thanks for the laugh Gojira
I'm pretty sure you would die from the water pressure.
NO. That is one of the stupidest things i have ever heard. Have you ever done that? I hope not.
Put in your own fire alarm and buy a few fire extinguishers for the apartment.
