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your question is very poor
I agree with cathrl69, stop describing the scene, it's like you could take man goes to the store and turn it into a 1000 page tome, explain what the characters are feeling, no one cares precisely what they're wearing or what their wooden analog watch/clock/sun dial looks like.
NoSorryTechnically it's fine.but pacing-wise? There isn't anyThere's no tension and no feeling for the characterIt's all detached, clinical description of the scene, and massive long sentences, some of which simply don't mean anythingI froze in place, tracing my finger along the veins in my waist, touching sensuously the blood which rushed through them so fast that some drops spurted out of the cuts that had once been stitched as they appeared to be the exitCome on, read that on its ownWhat's it supposed to be saying? My wrist was bleeding from the previously stitched cuts? Why did that take you two and a half lines to say? I don't know what the exit phrase is supposed to mean, and how can she be frozen if her fingers are moving? I know I said this on your last question.but you need to get into her headForget precisely what the gun looks likeShe thinks she's about to dieHow does she feel? Write that, not the viewer's eye TV slo-mo versionThat's very much the impression I get here - that you're visualising the scene as if you were a remote observer watching it on a screenYou probably think I'm being horrible and mean hereI wouldn't have said _anything_ if your writing wasn't intrinsically not bad at all.
Okin traditional publishing they will pay youThey will want to read a sample of your work first then decide if you are right for themIt is a bit like winning the lottery and many publishers will not even look at unagented writing (so ideally you should have an agent first.) Then there is self publishingYou pay generally for formatting, isbn, some promo, having it made into an ebook, and usually get between 5-25 copies,depending on the dealNormally after that the book can be ordered as a print on demand book, meaning you don't have to order/pay for loads of copies you might not sellThere have been lots of recent success stories in self publishing, but you will need to do LOTS of self publicity in order to sell wellAnd you WILL have to be pretty good in order to sell, because, unless you pay to have an editor look it over, you must do all the revisions yourself and newbies often can't see their flaws or know how to rectify themThe scams tend to be the ones that offer to print anything from a camera ready copy and ask you to purchase several hundred books outrightThese usually look really home made and ugly, and are usually expensive as heck.A few so-called 'publishing' houses out there also claim to be real publishers because they don't charge a feeBut what they do is print really expensive copies of your book and give you no free author's copies, in the hopes you and your family/friends will buy them anyway, and this is how they make their moneyApparently they have really restrictive contracts that people have a hard time getting out of.
