Monsters: 20Zombie Master x3IL Blud x2Pyramid Turtle x3Paladin of the Cursed Dragon x2Patrician of Darkness x2Ryu Kokki x2Bone Crusher x1Malevolent Mech - Goku En x1Grave Squirmer x1Vampire Lord x1Sillva, Warlord of Dark World x1Vampire Genesis x1Spells:14Card Destruction x1Terraforming x1Book of life x1Zombie World x2Heavy Storm x2Field Barrier x2Call of the Mummy x2Tribute to the Doom x2Hammer Shot x1Traps:12Compulsory Evacuation Device x3Dust Tornado x1Sakuretsu Armor x1Bottomless Trap Hole x2Call of the Haunted x1Dark Illusion x1Tutan Mask x2Magic Cylinder x1
Try another Vampire Lord and a Vampire's Curse instead of the Patrician's. Also try 2x Lightning Vortex instead of the Tribute to the Doomed, throw in 2 more Books of Life too. You can only have 1 Heavy Storm.
Zombie Master x3 IL Blud x3 Pyramid Turtle x3 Paladin of the Cursed Dragon x3 Patrician of Darkness x3 Bone Crusher x3 Grave Squirmer x2 Card Destruction x1 Book of life x3 Zombie World x3 Heavy Storm x1 Call of the Mummy x2 Tribute to the Doomed x1 Compulsory Evacuation Device x3 Dust Tornado x1 Bottomless Trap Hole x2 Call of the Haunted x1 Dark Illusion x1 Tutan Mask x1 also try to get some stuff like Armageddon Knight, Dark Nephthys, Darknight Parshath, Darklord Zerado, stuff like that. but only use like 1-3 of these cards, because you just don't need too many. and don't think that the old-school zombie stuff is of limits. Berserk Dragon can be normal summoned, or special summoned by a spell card, plus, a great effect!