A lot say that the only team in their way are the celtics. It's aggravating cause the bulls are good, lol. And truthfully they need to beware of the magic to.
Ignore the first answer. The grammar is fine, and that particular user isn't exactly a reliable source of critique. Your problem is that it lacks drama, and you start a lot of sentences with he. That makes the writing awkward to read. And you were right when you said you should have thought of where to go with it. I've got my own story to write - you work on your own.
